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©2009-2010 ~EmoSunshineMuffin
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All about state of mind.

theme challenge #2: Freedom

prompt also for *Prompt-A-Day

theme was bolted and chained or something like that

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:iconteefie:
I looove thisss!

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:iconemosunshinemuffin:
meh. i love the sentiment but not the words.

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and the dullest shade of gray

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:iconteefie:
I love it all!

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:icon3wyl:
I like your perception on freedom and such. The last stanza is quite interesting. :nod:

But yes, your structure is brilliant, as always.

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:iconblackenedcherri:
ok so I agree that it could've come out better.

However, I'm faving it for this part alone:

i prefer the passion
in a moonlit kiss
to just the touching of lips.


...it's speaks as if it's made out of moonlight, like a whisper in the night. I love that part alone.

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